First cut of my teaser trailer: HUNTED

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FbVNXnQu3ZE&feature=youtu.be

Here is the first cut of my teaser trailer that I have been working on for the past two weeks. I experimented using atmospheric sound and fades between shots.

Feedback:

These are the results from a peer assessment of my work.

Construction main task	Minimal	Basic	Proficient	Excellent
Holding shot steady			IIII = 4 votes	III = 3 votes
Framing a shot			IIIII = 5 votes	II = 2 votes
Appropriate material		II  = 2 votes	II = 2 votes	III = 3 votes
Selecting mise en scene		II = 2 votes	IIII = 4 votes	I = 1 vote
Editing for meaning		I = 1 vote	IIII = 4 votes	II = 2 votes
Varied shot transitions, caption and other FX		II = 2 votes	IIIII = 5 votes
Use of sound with images/editing		III = 3 votes	III = 3 votes	I = 1 vote
Overall			IIIIII = 6 votes	I = 1 vote

What people said:

• Maybe finish on the chair shot
• Include some foley sounds
• The sting at the end is really effective
• Atmospheric sound is really good
• Use more stings
• Knife image/poster - need some sort of sound to enhance meaning
• Add in a scream
• Experiment with fonts
• Close up when she is tied up (jolted zoom)
• Slow down the canted shot - it's a really good shot (maybe a freezeframe)
• Have more of a sound build up at the beginning
• Framing and the camera work are brilliant
• Make the font smaller

From this, I have been editing my teaser trailer and making improvements from this feedback.